This is Target 01 of Disk O3 of the basic DVD course. TRN is 8403/8475. Thanks for any comments/criticisms anyone cares to offer.

Victor

Greetings Victor,

First and foremost was the obvious example of AOL drive, in your session. This happens when an AOL doesn't dissipate and the viewer carries the idea with them throughout the session, thereby tainting/skewing all subsequent data. The idea of a firearm appeared at the beginning of your session and stayed until the end. Despite declaring this and related AOLs repeatedly, your session data continued to reflect this idea throughout all stages of your session. You must ensure that you fully dissipate any AOLs before continuing with your session.

As for your structure, you are doing well. A few items of note to remember:

S2[X] you are mixing your category percepts. Follow the order on your word descriptor list. If any percepts are perceived out of order declare as AOL for now.

S4[X] Be aware that some percepts are in wrong column. 'metallic' and 'hard' belong in the S column not D column.

S2[A] Same advice as for S2[X]

S3[A] Be sure to include all S2 dimension words in your analytical sketch. Small, dense, and fast are not included, if word cannot be drawn in line form than include word in sketch where you feel appropriate.

S4[A] Be careful with T column entries. Animal doesn't seem to be justified with previous S and D percepts. Also notice how animal changed to machine and related I data reflected firearm and should have been declared AOL.

S3[B] Refer to S3[A] advice

S4[B] All emotions listed in AI column should be prefixed with AI- and treated like AOL.